영문이력서



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영문 이력서 첨삭

<영문 이력서 원본>

EDUCATION:

Bachelor of International Commerce
Feb 2001 - Feb 2005  ***** UNIVERSITY
Overall GPA : 4.3 / 4.5
Received multiple scholarship and graduated first on the list
   
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATIONS:
 
Over 5 years experience in duty free business field
Excellent knowledge in retail and luxury brand business
Proficient in MS program (holding a certification- practical capability of personal computer level 2)
Able to communicate in English (holding a certification – international commerce English level 1)
Good communication and presentation skills
Able to work in English
Multitask, enjoy hard working, flexible, enthusiastic

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Period / company: Sep 2006 – Jul 2010 ***** International
(Separated from ***** Company Limited)
Oct 2003 – Sep 2005 ***** company limited
Position: Assistant manager of Duty free business Department.
Responsible brand: Giorgio Armani Emporio Armani, Yves Saint Laurent, Max Mara, Diesel, Carerra sunglass  

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:

Merchandising: Work on orders in right time and right place. Coordinate until product is delivered to the clients
Sales staff management: All process from interview to training
Sales administration: Plan a promotion to boost performance with GWP or HPP, Visit all shops regularly to follow up shop maintenance, Implement VM and ensure each shop has the same look according to central strategy, Report sales performance and market issues to central.
Others: Prepare the collection event with new released items and do a presentation to client

 


<첨삭 수정 내용>

Email: ***@email.com
Phone: 000-000-0000

EDUCATION:

02/2005  B.S. (summa cum laude) in achelor of International Commerce, ***** University,  Seoul, Korea
Feb 2001 - Feb 2005  ***** UNIVERSITY
Overall GPA : 4.3 / 4.5
Received multiple scholarship and graduated first on the list
  
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATIONS: 
 
Over 5 years experience in duty free business field
Excellent knowledge in retail and luxury brand business
Proficient in MS program (holding a certification-practical capability of personal computer level 2)
Proficient Able to communicate in English (holding a certification–international commerce English level 1)
Good communication and presentation skills Able to work in English Multitask, enjoy hard working, flexible, enthusiastic

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Period / company: 09/Sep 2006 – 07/Jul 2010 ***** International
(Separated from ***** Company Limited)
10/Oct 2003 – 09/Sep 2005 ***** company limited
Position: Assistant manager of Duty free business Department. 
Responsible brand: Giorgio Armani Emporio Armani, Yves Saint Laurent, Max Mara, Diesel, Carerra sunglass 

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:

Merchandising: Work on orders in right time and right place. Coordinate until product to is delivered to the clients
Sales staff management: All Process from interview to training
Sales administration:
- Plan a promotion to boost performance with GWP or HPP (GWP or HPP가 무엇의 약자인지 밝혀주세요)
- Visit all shops regularly to follow up shop maintenance,
- Implement VM and ensure each shop has the same look according to central strategy
- Report sales performance and market issues to central.
- Others: Prepare the collection event with new released items and do a presentation to client




 

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